Reflection

Reflection

In analysis and inquiry I graded myself in “proficient/collage ready” because I had almost all the things in that box. I analyzed my ideas and explained the arguments in the story I tried my best to make everything clear. I explained the conflict we had in the story. And I made my characters in the story sound clear for what they said.

In structure and organization I graded myself as developing, because I didn’t give that much persuasive strategy to support the position. I didn’t give much support to some of my ideas. My writing is organized but I need more feedback so the reader would understand better. Also I would need more feedback so that the reader could have a great image on what was happening in the story.

In command of language I graded myself as “developing”, because I did had some distracting errors in my grammar. I did explain in some parts it did sound inaccurate. I do need some work in my grammar some parts didn’t sound that clear and need it to explain a bit more. I need it more details on some parts of the memoir. I didn’t really check the grammar in the computer because at the end I found some errors in my writing.